My Dash

I would have to say that my dash in life is my family, boyfriend, and my friends. I spend all of my time with them and they all mean the world to me. I have so many great memories with these special people, and I would do anything for them. My family and I are very close and I enjoy living at home while attending college. Pretty much without my mom I would be the most unorganized disaster ever. I am so glad I have her to keep my head on straight when my life gets hectic.

Taking Stock of My Work

*I think I told my story pretty well. I could have added a bit more detail in certain places, but my paper was already long enough
*I think I did a good job with the rough draft of my paper, which then made the final draft very easy and quick for me.
*I feel my word choice could have been better along with more detail in my work.
*I come up with my ideas when im sitting in front of my computer on the microsoft word screen, I basically let all of my thoughts flow together and I correct my work as I go.
*I did not really even draft my narrative, I basically went right into it like I said. It was a story therefore i wrote it as I thought of how the events occured in my life.
*I did not use photographs or any other graphics
*I feel that almost all the changes I made were from my peer review and corrections I had made myself
*Next time I would definitly use a more extensive vocabulary and describe my narrative with more detail